Personal Introduction

Your personal introduction to your web page should be a concise and clearly worded paragraph containing information similar to that in a cover letter or a letter of introduction for a collage application.

You may have 1 of the following focuses:

1. Introduction of self, interests & activities

2. Introduction of self, future goals & plans

The focus of my introduction will be:

You will be explaining who you are; your strengths & achievements and goals. Give details. Make them specific and unique.

DO NOT use meaningless phrases like “ I want to get a good job and make a lot of money,” no one wants a bad job that makes no money.

Writing

You may also wish to refer the reader to your résumé. If you have had experience, be sure to point out your achievements or other qualifications.

Step 1 – Brainstorm using Inspiration. Remember you must have generalizations & details

Step 2 – Export your outline to text, open it in MS Word and begin writing your introduction.

Step 3

Devise a hook or an introduction sentence (not “Hi this is my webpage”)

Possible options include

· A question

· A quote

· A startling statement or fact

Step 4

Revise for wording - Use the principles below:

* Grammar and writing must be correct in every aspect. You should project yourself as intelligent and capable

* Get to the point and be concise give details and avoid jargon, slang, and clichés. Use facts to support your generalizations.

* Put the most relevant, impressive information first.

* Be energetic and enthusiastic these are qualities that are valued in college and the world of work.

Grading

Has a hook (step 3)	5 pts
Has at least 3 generalizations (or main points)	6 pts
Has sufficient details to support your generalization	5 pts
Details & generalizations are unique & interesting	4 pts
Paragraph has required transitions; it flows	5 pts
Paragraph has a clear end	5 pts
Total	/30